Hi Tommy-Dean, We liked your poem because you used fantastic words in it. We liked the pictures you used because they made us want to read it. Do you like winter? What is your favourite part of winter? Thank you for sharing your poem with us. From Taonga Class
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Hi Tommy-Dean,
ReplyDeleteWe liked your poem because you used fantastic words in it. We liked the pictures you used because they made us want to read it.
Do you like winter?
What is your favourite part of winter?
Thank you for sharing your poem with us.
From Taonga Class
hi Tommy -Dean Really like yore winter poihcre
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